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Post by meow on Jul 9, 2009 15:59:06 GMT -8
Name:Finalstar
Age:20 moons
Gender:Female
Rank:Leader
Clan:Silverclan
Eyes:
A bright white daisy,but you look in the inside.The inside of the daisy,the yellow part in the middle.That is how you could describe her eyes.bright yellow eyes with a medium diamond shaped pupil.They make her look intelligent.They show most of her emotions.
Pelt:
A black faced cat.She has a white chin.Her chest is white and most two-legs would call it a "bib."The rest off her body is mainly black,except for her white paws and tail tip.Her fur is short and always well-groomed.She hardly ever sheds any of her fur.
Body:
Slim and agile, borne as a Silverclan makes this obvious. But there is a good amount of muscles on the bones of this little kitty. Some wonder is her parents were Windclan cats, small but muscular.Who knows she could possibly be Windclan?
Personality:
Shy and Attentive;;This she-cat would never dive right into a relationship,whether it is a friendly or romantic.Though she despises love and never really searches.She is quite a good listener and knows every word you say.She could repeat everything you said to her,each and every word.
Creative and Imaginative;;Always the first to com up with a great idea.She is not afraid to show someone her width of intelligence that even a clan cat would be jealous of.She loves sitting in her daydreams and just imaging how her life might turn out.She never sees herself with prince charming.
Kind and selfless;;The first to give something to someone else some of her stuff if they are in greater need of it then herself.She is so sweet and caring.No one thinks twice before asking her for help.They know she will always help them or anyone else in need.Some wonder if she is ambitious to rule the kitty-pet world.The answer is NOPE!
History:
Finalkit]]Borne to Sinstar and Lichenwing.Nothing much happned to her.She was orne with two cats,the only living out of the litter,dadada.
Finalpaw]]Mentor was the newly made Tigermyth.Again nothing much happened to her.
Finalfeather]]Earned warrior name .Fell in love had dead kits nananana.Again nothing much.
Finalstar]]NOPE
Kin:Sinstar(Father),(Lichenwing)Mother,no siblings
Mate:None
Offspring:NOPERS
Mentor/Apprentice:Mentor//Tigermyth,apprentice:Twopaw(Twofoot),Sanitypaw(Sanityfur)
Roleplayer:Meow
Roleplay Sample:
Finalfeather looked around.Her father,Sinstar was looking at something next to her.Sh had no idea as to whether he saw her.So she hid behind the tree.She hardly dared to let out a breathe.Finally he looked away.She slipped over to another tree and slowly made her way back to camp.See me now you don't,she thought.
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Post by Gingerstar on Jul 11, 2009 10:59:03 GMT -8
Just add a little more detail to the history. What happened to Sinstar? Did he lose his last life to sickness? Did he retire? What happened to Lichenwing? Do she too die of an illness? Is she an Elder? And for her apprenticehood were there any battles? Did Finalpaw break a leg? You need to include a little more details then just Finalkit's parents were Sinstar and Lichenwing. Apprenticed to Tigermyth, nothing happened. Became Finalfeather, had kits, but all died. No that's no acceptable. If you add a little more details to your history then it should be good to go.
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