Sunpaw

[wolfsong]

Name:Sunpaw
Age: 8 moons
Gender:she-cat
Rank: Medicine cat appentice
Clan:silver clan


Eyes: Sunpaw has deep amber eyes so deep that when you gaze into them, you can't stop.
pelt: Sunpaw has a white pelt with gray tabby stripes.
body: Sunpaw has a lean small body that is good for crawling in a small place.
Personality: Sunpaw is very secretive and honest.She enjoys her slow life in the clan .Sunpaw is very courages.She is modest and brave.Sunpaw likes to be with her friends or alone.


Kin:unknown
Mate: looking
Offspring: wanted
Mentor/Apprentice:Whisperwind



Roleplayer: Wolfsong
Roleplay Sample:Moonstar (random leader) stalked out of the sunlit den and felt a sudden blast of energy on his pelt . Knowing it had rained last night and alot of worms would bring birds on to the misty territory. After sending a dawn patrol with warriors that were healthy, Moonstar went to the Staroak, where he went to vist Starclan on short notice. walking beside the stream to the ancient tree, Moonstar stopped.Something wasn't right.Moonstar looked up. High in the tree a small cat was collecting herbs. "okay.... I got enough for clan?.......... yeah...."the small cat muttered to her self. "Let me help you." Moonstar called up the tree."we got three more cats sick, two kits and a warrior with greencough.Did you stay up all night again?" The white cat looked silver in the sunlight as she nodded. she had started to run when her leader had said three cats were sick. she got to her den and took the leaves she had and ran to her clanmates and treated them in record time. .

[eclipsestar]

This is uncomplete. You have to fill out everything in the format below.


[blockquote][center][b]Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Clan:[/b][/center]
[left][b]Eyes:[/b](please be descriptive)
[b]Pelt:[/b](at least four lines)
[b]Body:[/b](describe your cats body)

[b]Personality:[/b]Four lines please.
[b]History:[/b](optional)

[b]Kin:[/b]
[b]Mate:[/b]
[b]Offspring:[/b]
[b]Mentor/Apprentice:[/b]
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[center][b]Roleplayer:[/b]
[b]Roleplay Sample:[/b](For your first cat only, please have it be at least a paragraph(4-7 sentences) Thanks)[/center]
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If you knew it wasn't done and meant to say it wasn't I understand but, use the exact format please.
You have most of it, hust missing a few things.
History is optional.

[wolfsong]

Cas' its not done!

[wolfsong]

i think its done now!

[eclipsestar]

Almost. You need more on your personality and pelt.

[wolfsong]

it was already accepted..... im soooooooo sorry see, my comput was down when i made it and i thought that i couldn't fine it and it got deleted, so i made it again after seachen' every where until my dumb comput died, sooooo sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Gingerstar]

Calm down Wolfsong. Clipsy was just letting you know. And no one is accusing you of anything. Just take a deep breath and relax. Clipsy is this bio to your liking now? ^_^

[eclipsestar]

ah. that makes me sound mean.... ):
But If you like it I like it, I was just stating.
Wolfy, so you know, I was in NO way, trying to be rude, I appologize if it came off that way.
Id recomend a little more on pelt, and possibly another line on personality.
But those are my recomendations, Again sorry if it came off rude.
Im not mean, I promise. :-P