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Post by sharin on Jun 7, 2009 3:36:55 GMT -8
They call me and I answer : Dapplestar
Age: 25 moons
Chrosomes Read: Female
Rank: Shade Clan Leader
Clan: Shade Clan
Eyes: Dapplestar has distinctive eyes as deep and blue as the ocean. Along with her single streak, her eyes also reflect her moods. When she is happy, her eyes seem to glisten and sparke like the waves reflecting the sun. When she is caring and gentle or with someone she truly loves or cares about, his eyes seem to liquefy and show her happiness. When she is angry or tense, her eyes tend to become like a solid; they harden, and her thoughts begin to cloud with worry and concern for her clan. When upset, her eyes darken and become cloudy, as if nothing anyone says really registers to her yet.
Pelt:Dapplestar has a very unique pelt aside from the rest of ShadeClan. Because her origins are not known, her pelt stands out compared to everyone else. At a first glance, Dapplestar is seen as a normal black long-haired female with strange blue eyes. When looked at thoroughly, Dapplestar has more than that. Along her back, starting at her neck, is a thin grey stripe that extends to the tip of her tail. The stripe is a deep shade of grey that is barely visible in the dark. The stripe is a thin, small streak that is a very big part of Dapplestar’s name. When Dapplestar is content or happy, she usually stands with more weight on her left paw than on her right. Because of this, the stripe tends to shift more to her left side. When she is upset, she tends to lean more on her right paw, making the stripe shift more to her right side. This is an easy indication of what mood Dapplestar is in.
Body: Dapplestar's body is a bit skinny,though whenever she hunts food, the same intruder snatches it away before she could even take her first bite.Her body's length is 31 inches and had weight...ummm...some unknown pounds.
Personality:Dapplestar is a kind girl, still young to bear her own cubs and had wished to have one,she was born with great skills of a hunter,her mouth is what makes her in trouble.She is a brave girl,who dares to disobey her lair-father,the clan leader(long time ago).She can be very fierce and tough but can also be responsible and faithful.Dapplestar was not a silent type of cat,but is an opposite of silent.(Yes! She is talkative..)
History:Well,I have not thought of that yet......
Kin: unknown
Mate: looking
Offspring: wishing to have
Mentor/Apprentice: never had any
Roleplayer:Sharin
Roleplay Sample:Dapplestar jumped over a fern thicket and dug her paws to the ground.She stared at the intruder who was munching her prey,she bared her teeth,showing her fangs,the intruder, somehow,on the daylight,where the intruder sat on top of the sunning, she felt a strange feeling, whenever she looked at him,she thought he was beautiful.Dapplestar turned her head away from him and walked away. Why did he look so beautiful?..somehow I had feelings for him..am I....falling...in-love? Dapplestar thought, walking to a path where new adverntures awaits.
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Post by rainfur on Jun 7, 2009 11:40:21 GMT -8
This is a great bio with nice detail, and I would LOVE to accept it, but there is a couple of problems I found with the bio. Here in the warrior's rp, we use warrior cat names. Reshara is not a warrior name. A warrior name is kind of two words put together. Though, they have to be about nature or the cat or something.
Good Examples:Icetail [Ice and Tail] Rainfur [Rain and fur] Parrottpaw [parrott and paw] See what I mean? Bad Examples:Sarah Tablepaw [/b] Kit [When they are first born to 6 moons old] Apprentice [When they are training to become a warrior starting at 6 moons] Warrior [The average rank. These cats defend and hunt for their clans] Queen
Deputy [The co-leader and is in charge of patrols and when the leader isn't there. Becomes leader after leader dies/retires]
Leader [Leads the clan]
Now with YOUR cat, since it's 25 moons old and is a female, it qualifies as a deputy, leader, queen, or warrior
If it is a leader, the name has to end in Star. Like, WolfSTAR, CherrySTAR, so on. Other names don't matter, and I won't go into kit and apprentice names since you don't have to worry about that. |
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Post by sharin on Jun 8, 2009 19:58:09 GMT -8
okay thanks
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Post by sharin on Jun 8, 2009 20:03:21 GMT -8
Okay it's done!Finally!
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Post by Gingerstar on Jun 8, 2009 20:30:06 GMT -8
Ok two things. One why does the post title say Blackstar and the character say Dapplestar? Two please try to end the name like this: Daystar, Dapplestar, Nightclaw. Please don't do it the way you were doing it: BlackStar, DappleStar, YuccaDance. I know it would probably be easier to read, but that isn't how the characters in the books have their names. Other than that I think its good to go... what do you think Rainy?
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Post by sharin on Jun 8, 2009 20:31:52 GMT -8
ohh sorry it was supposed to be DappleStar,
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Post by Gingerstar on Jun 8, 2009 20:34:09 GMT -8
Ok just checking. And again please try to keep the second half of the name lowercased. Blackstar, Dapplestar, Gingerstar. They don't have it in the books like that. And again I think its good to go so we'll just wait for Rainy to say.
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Post by sharin on Jun 8, 2009 20:36:45 GMT -8
Well,I've been changing names lately and I have no more ideas on cat names, and every names are like taken.
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Post by sharin on Jun 8, 2009 22:51:13 GMT -8
Okay,I am not going to be accepted,  |
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Post by Gingerstar on Jun 9, 2009 7:56:01 GMT -8
I think its good Sharin so I'll go ahead and accept it.  |
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Post by rainfur on Jun 9, 2009 10:18:28 GMT -8
Yep! It's good :3
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Post by sharin on Jun 10, 2009 0:14:05 GMT -8
Thanks! *hugs Gingerstar and Rainy*
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